EH MA GAWD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Marthana]

well i have read some of the recent posts and what's ^ with them you guys are capable to put somthing more than "she nuzzled him back" guys ypour making me cry! look at some of cherry's posts that she recent;y put ^ she goes on about things going on okay i'll tell you the stuff i think youd be posting by now

Hearing birds chours of the saintity of the doing of the calm flat. the knee high weeds entited in 'er legs when the blowed. 'he didn't care for the only thing that mattered was that she had finnally decided who was right for 'er. nipping affectionatly his cheek.

all of you are apable this is what you are allowed to do in a hurry

She grazed her cheek against his showing loyaty and realisation

okay just show DETAIL not like he ran up the hill got tried and lay down. EMG people whats gotten into ur rpging it hurts me

I'm sorry if you think i'm rude about this but if you need help just reply here and ask me how to improve i'm not trying to be rude

[Stardust Beauty + White storm]

Mine aren't the best cos other pplz post are so basic i can hardly put anyfing. I play an rpg called Blue mountains faithmountain.proboards37.com/
and i play a charrie called Twisted Outlaw. Here's my joinin post for him;

Dark hellion of 5 winters past, ingressed pon the mountains swiftly. A incriminating scream burst from his lungs as he flew through the land at a 4-beat quickening gait. Pistons carried him softly on the untouched, unearthed crust like they always did. Only earthen epidermis was clearly visible in the light day from the abyss he was in. His saunter came down as his nares caught scent of a fae. He progressed on through the topography, talons pressed down on dead leaves as his pistons continued their journey. Bland feelings only seemed to fall into the air as his dial, held high, swung with his swinging strides.

His harks flickered into the breeze as his embodiment came to an abrupt stop. Lamps scanned bout falling on a vixen nearby. Prodigious bulk became taller, menacing in the unfolded scene. As the fae came into view with his darkened pools his lambums peeled to show wet crimson blood on his waxen inamels. They reached out to reaveal a nip on her aud, a nip that would never heal. He watched in pleasure as crimson blood began to seep out. Harks straightened to catch a whisper that fell into them crisply.

~Why may you whisper? The blood is still falling~

Daggers pinced intently into the ground as he awaited for the mares next action. Plumage snapped against his hocks in the wind and tassles covered his scarlet oculars. Hiss fell into the air from his larynx and bent into the lithe xanithroppe's auds.

~Is the pain building?~

I hope that gives some inspiration but NO STEALING!!! I trust u guys so if i see this anywhere else there WILL be trouble.

[BEAUTIFUL MESANDY]

ya that's an awsome rpg but i quit b/c of all my piling rpgs all your posts are awsome when you can be but one of your recent ones with vanished was suky no offense but like alot of rpgers inspire me to write more

[|Mystify|]

I think my posts are pretty good but sometimes I am too lazy to write alot of detail in

[|Mystify|]

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